For We Write Poems’ Prompt #95, which encouraged us to write about something in the natural world from a not-so-common point of view.
Salad Night
I’ve murdered the cook
in this mansion mystery —
Look, my hands are slick
like a surgeon’s when he searches
for this or that organ,
I’ve even got the knife and heart
to prove it. ย It’s bigger
and rounder than most
and has gone quite still,
except for its tendency
to stain the kitchen tiles
and cutting board a ghastly
red (would a killer use
such a word, ghastly?)
To remove and conceal
all evidenceย I’ve chopped
the fist-sized thing up
into bits with the poor guy’s
own meat cutter and
put it into the mix
as tasty, chewy beet.
This is like a murder mystery trip, indeed.
This must be written from experience! I wonder if anyone has ever made an admission of guilt in a blog!
Shh!h!! ๐
Murderer of beets!! I think they’d use the word ghastly, (an educated murderer would any way!) Fun one. ๐
Thanks for your thoughts Hannah!
Your welcome! ๐
I like ithe poem very much, but I like not the mess preparing beets makes in the kitchen – I’m with you there.
Yes, it’s always a slightly horrifying mess!
indeed a real nice trip….thanks for sharing
Thanks Wayne!
I love this poem, even though it’s a bit gory sounding. Doesn’t put me off beets, though… ๐
Thanks Ruth! Yes, beets are too delicious to be put off on them ๐
Well, now I’ve got more competition in the dark and ghastly department. I love the gory details and how you lead us to the surprise ending.
Nicole
I appreciate the comment, Nicole!